I.
three girls in the backseat
quiver shake and rock
like they know they will, the day
they know they're never coming back
captain madness at the wheel
shakes his fist at the open road
and my hair flies in the summer wind
II.
we forget we're just three small girls
in an old car in a huge dark world
but for now, that '55 chevy is our universe
with our silent driver
we are small and wild-eyed
captain madness has joined us in the backseat
tiny bones halfway out the window
screaming joy
alive for one drive
III.
this time around the block it's different
the old car screeches (o how it used to hum)
now we're all halfway out the windows
screaming only air, because
everything else has been yelled before
it's all been hollered already
from some other backseat















Comments
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I wish I could look you in the eye, but I'd burn a hole in your beautiful head.
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A storm is rising.
Quality writing, but I would have liked it to progress a little.
Still good and congrats on the DD.
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A picture, like a human, will speak a thousand words, and never say a goddamn thing.
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"Poetry is when an emotion finds a thought, and the thought finds words." Robert Frost
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I am ~MUSICxxJUNKIE now. Add me.
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Fueled by
I enjoyed this a lot!!
BRAVO on the daily deviation.
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SWORDEXPERT!!
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